The paper needs to be more critical thinking. The body needs to where the author raised some issues in the book and discussing one in each paragraph. There needs to be textual evidence with the page number of the book at the end of the quote in parenthesis but the textual evidence can’t be too long it needs to be ellipses is the quote is too long. It needs to be written in a history stand point so past tense is needed but using present tense when talking about the author not using the pronoun “I”, always stay in the third person. You can’t start a paragraph with a pronoun. Have to include own thoughts about an issue when writing about it in the paragraph, essentially backing up what the thought. Have to comment on the author at some point saying if i agree with her and was she fair and how she could improve the book using the authors last name and present case when talking about her.